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Georgia cotton field blossoms with snow
©2009 =bekkia
:iconbekkia:

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for *the-haiku-club's one-liner contest. [link]

I rather like this one. I think I learned a lot writing so many haiku last month.

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:iconiscariot-priest:
Assuming Georgia is the state, I'd recommend you capitalize it as it's a proper noun.

And, this bit's for fun (I recommend you try it with the other participants =p): if there were lines, I'd put them as such:
georgia
cotton field blossoms
with snow

accurate?

--
“Now me lay down to sleep.
Mow da zeebas down like sheep.
Give dem to me nice and dead.
Me no happy ‘til me fed.”
-Bedtime prayer of crocs, Pearls Before Swine
:iconbekkia:
Yessir, that's where they'd be. Might as well capitalize it. ^^; Is there a place where I can easily find the other entries?
:iconzekidear:
I've never seen a cotton field except for pictures. This makes them seem very pretty. (:

--

"No More Sunshine"

it was raining that night.
the night the paramedics stopped.
stopped for a second. stopped for a minute.
just stopped.
:iconbekkia:
It seems like so long since I've been in one. But don't take it from me, I find beauty in everything.
:iconlosingmyfaith:
i like it, good job (:

--
" ...he's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, his and mine are the same, and Linton's is as different as a moonbeam from lightning, or frost from fire."
:iconriencuran:
Very nice :) It's interesting how one simple line can be so beautiful and have such imagery.

--
A purpose of human life, no matter who is controlling it, is to love whoever is around to be loved.
-Kurt Vonnegut
:icondjoseph:
Nice one! The image of a cotton field works especially well as a one-liner I think. :)

--
ARS BREVIS VITA LONGA

R.I.P Larry Norman 4/8/1947 - 2/24/2008

"Achieving perfection in anything takes at least two lifetimes"

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