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Steven

We were so naïve,
made of chalk drawings of suns and cubes in the drive,
paisley jumpers or jeans with holes and mud under fingernails.

To think, a stick was just a stick and not a sword
or a metaphor between us. And our multiplying freckles
were only signs of age, not beauty or relics of kisses
left by angels and mothers and you.

We left the only magic in the rows of planted pines
miles between our houses, not the circles of mushrooms
or the tree-rain that lingered every day after four.

What we were, we never outgrew like clay-caked shoes
or haircuts with bangs or being able to talk to each other
without so much hidden meaning. Because I see
the boy you were in the sunspots on your shoulders
or the baby crow’s feet around your eyes or the way
we stand together waiting for the bus in the morning rain,
and I know you’re thinking:  we were so naïve.



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©2009 =bekkia
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Author's Comments

To Steven.



Today's prompt:
Write a poem like a letter for poetry, or a letter like a poem for prose. Always make the feelings real.

Thanks for the DD, ^LadyLincoln

Daily Deviation

Given 2009-07-06

Steven by =bekkia reminds us of our childhood, with vivid images that we can hold onto in our memories. We can easily taste and touch all of the beautiful descriptions presented here. (Featured by ^LadyLincoln)

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:icondeliciouspenguin:
THIS IS FANTASTIC! everything means so much and i am in awe :heart:
:iconandyslade:
I enjoyed reading that.

:)

--
"Happiness in intelligent people is the rarest thing I know."

Hemingway.
:iconbeep-boop01:
I wish my name was steven, so you'd be talking to me. whoever he is, he's lucky to have a girl like you writing poems about him.
:iconyouinventedme:
To think, a stick was just a stick and not a sword
or a metaphor between us. And our multiplying freckles
were only signs of age


wonderful

--
an antique arms and armor expert

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