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Wonderland Wordspill by =bekkia:iconbekkia:



Dreams of children contain silly things. Like flying teacups and daffodil rings. And in these dreams, the rings do sing and translate into sound playgrounds only for children to drink.

In the playground, I do remember, not a mild, quaint September, but a forest thick with trees and leaves and fire bees that drew banners behind quiet ember.

There, cats wear clothes, and never lock their doors. Even the boogiemen sleep with teddy bears wrapped in their boney claws.

Since then, boogiemen’s claws have given way to briefcases and ties. Teacups wings fade to simple packets of leaves. Cats in trousers feel uncomfortable.

Daffodil rings wilt.

But at times, we stilt, back to the lilt and rhyme of a child’s time where whimsy yet whirls in our imagination.
©2008-2009 =bekkia
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Author's Comments

I love wordspilling. :heart:
~Wordspill
Do it.

The topic was childhood dreams.

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:iconclosedcorridors:
WOW! This makes me smile and makes me sad all at the same time. Don't you miss childhood? Life was so much simpler then. Beautiful work. It almost seems to rhythmic to be prose. Love it!

Note: I think "teddy bears" should be "teddy bear" in the third paragraph.

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I love the way that we laugh until we cry
Dance until we die
:iconbekkia:
Thanks. It does make me kind of sad, but after a while of being too adult, I got to be a camp counselor. You totally become a kid again. That kind of inspired this.
:iconclosedcorridors:
Oh yeah. I know what you mean. I'm one of the youth leaders for my church's camps and retreats. Isn't it fun to be a kid again? It's nice to break away from my austere bank job and dance around and goof off a couple times a year. :D

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I love the way that we laugh until we cry
Dance until we die
:iconzelme:
Wow, the rhythm of this piece just sucked me in. It reminds me of Lewis Carroll. Nice job! :)
:iconbekkia:
Thank you! Glad I could imitate it, though I haven't read it since I was in single digits.
:iconsloppisloth:
i loved the topic of dreams, imagination, and child perspective! its fresh, it makes me remember what matters. what is wordspill? (im about to click the link)

I am glad i am so immature, im still in that child like state.

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If you like to think deeply, send me a note.
:iconbekkia:
Just click the link. It'll explain better than I can.

And Thanks.
:icontwistedalyx:
Cats in trousers feel uncomfortable.

Whimsical and bittersweet. Nice that it has a hopeful note at the end. :)

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[insert something witty here]
:iconbekkia:
Yeah, always the optimist. I think we all need a little more whimsy in our lives.

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